ഓണകൊടി [ബിഗ്ഗ് ബോസ്സ്]

Suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper, nice built up for the next chapter, gr8 elaboration,keep it up.

I think expectations from readers are too high. This first part are giving so much expectations. That's why too many comments are here regarding expectations and suggestions. Author should take it as challenge to make this story to fulfilling reader's all expectations and suggestions. I think this author will consider reader's mind.

Eagerly waiting for next part. But please don't compromise with speed. Just go through like this with same speed. Slowly tell the story. Here telling slowly is more important than sex . Then only can enjoy.

Jayan should invest/deposit his venom/poison/eggs 🥚🥚🥚/semen/sperm into the deep of womb of Haseena, Haseena's sister and Roshni etc. These three ladies should carry pregnancy from Jayan simultaneously. Each ladies should support each other after their virginity losing to get babies from Jayan. Haseena and her sister should conceive Jayan's 🥚 semen sperm in their first sex items through their vagina into the deepest part of their womb. They should not take any pills or any precautionary methods to avoid pregnancy. Every time they should receive his 🥚🥚🥚🥚 into their womb and should leading or converting into the babies. Along with these two sisters, Roshni should also carry Jayan's baby at the same time to support these two sisters immensely. Both sisters should get first night vibes in their first sex with Jayan. Because they are not getting married. Hence they have to enjoy their first night as a custom. For getting first night vibes for Haseena, Jayan-Roshni team should decorate the room and do all essential things for first night ambience. For getting first night vibes for Haseena's sister, Jayan-Roshni-Haseena team should decorate the room and do all essential things for first night ambience.

Take enough time. Please don't compromise with speed. We need slow and steady story. Try to detailing all scenes in very natural and enjoyable manner. After reading the all comments, it's so pleasure. Majority of the comments are very interesting and can include the next part itself. Especially some comments on Haseena's moments. It's awesome. First time fuck is always to be celebrated as it's losing something like purity, virginity, severe tightness etc. So I request the author to explain first time fuck of each ladies as a festival mode. Actually some comments are giving immense pleasure and momentum. If it's included, can expand this story upto 50+ parts.

Take enough time to write the next part. Before publishing the remaining parts, if u can to include in your stories, plz consider reader's request-comments-suggestions. Because I think this theme has a depth of feelings, imotions, relationships etc.

Before the real sex between Haseena and Jayan, we want the following incidents # more conversations between Roshni and Haseena regarding sex between Roshni-Jayan couple, structure on Jayan's penis, feelings on intercourse sex etc. # Haseena's thinking about the moments of sex between Roshni -Jayan couple, what will happen if Jayan is approaching, about what will happen to the friendship if she allows Jayan to fuck. # Roshni-Jayan team plans of action, strategies to bring Haseena to the bed. For this, need more conversations between Roshni-Jayan, Roshni-Haseena, Jayan-Haseena, Roshni-Jayan-Haseena combos. # Lesbian sex between Roshni-Haseena. # Decorating room for getting a first night vibe by Roshni-Jayan team. # Roshni bring Haseena into the room of couple Roshni-Jayan, Jayan waiting for Haseena. # Roshni take initiatives to starter with Jayan. Roshni remove all dress of Haseena slowly and in elaborate method. # Elaborate the structure of Haseena in part by part. # Roshni taking initiative to adding both Jayan-Haseena into the sex. # Haseena thinking about precautions, pills, safe period, safety measures, condom etc # Haseena worried about pain, pregnancy, social status, society etc. # Roshni take Jayan's penis and insert it into the vulva/vagina of Haseena without any safe measures and Roshni insisting Haseena to enjoy the skin to skin without safe measures, to conceive semen sperms from Jayan, Roshni inculcating Haseena about the need of sex without pills and safety measures and the need of baby to change the life etc. After the insertion, we are expecting the following # High force and pressure to be applied by Jayan to penetrate his penis into the high tight virgin pussy of Haseena # Killing pain feelings by Haseena when Jayan insert his weapon # Too many attempts from Jayan to penetrating # Tightness of Haseena's vagina is a struggle for Jayan and ending the attempts in bleeding with virginity losing. # Haseena can't stop crying when she lost virginity due to high pressure forced through his penis, bleeding, tightness, severe pain etc # sex enjoyment, different positions etc # climax should be ended in insemination impregnation creampie. After first sex we are expecting the following: # Haseena's thinking about virginity losing, pureness of body etc. # Haseena thinking about future, sex in future etc # Trio begins to add Haseena's sister too and other ladies # threesome, foursome, virginity losing, creampie insemination impregnation, delivery of each three ladies. # Sex even during the time of gestation period. # welcoming babies of Haseena, Haseena's sister and Roshni by Jayan-Roshni-Haseena-Haseena's sister combo. These are my much more expectations, request and suggestions. Please consider these. It's upto you. You can decide, you may accept or reject.

Expecting virginity losing of Haseena on thiruvonam day. Before that expecting lesbian between Roshni and Haseena

If can add images for every character.

Expecting more pages. Because we need a lots of enjoyment in each part. So plz write ✍️ in more pages and if can plz elaborate each scene by scene. Consider all suggestions and comments from readers for next parts. Be calm and write. Take your own time to write (Sufficient time ). Till then we will wait for your extreme level fantastic remaining part. Don't urge to complete the story.

പ്രിയപ്പെട്ട എല്ലാ വായന കാരോടും ഞാൻ ഹൃദയത്തിൽ തൊട്ട് ക്ഷമ ചോദിക്കുന്നു.... എനിക്ക് കുറച്ചു തിരക്കുകൾ അപ്രധീക്ഷിത മായി വന്നത് കൊണ്ട് ആണ് രണ്ടാം ഭാഗം എഴുതാൻ വഴുകിയത്.... നിങ്ങൾ ഒരു പാട് പേര് എന്റെ എളിയ കഥ വായിച്ചു വിലയേറിയ ഒരുപാട് ഒരുപാട് നിർദ്ദേഷങ്ങൾ പങ്കു വെച്ചത് ഒക്കെ ഇപ്പോൾ ആണ് കാണുന്നത്.... നമ്മൾ കഷ്ടപ്പെട്ട് കഥ എഴുതുമ്പോൾ വായനക്കാരിൽ നിന്നും നമ്മൾ തിരിച്ചു പ്രേതീക്ഷിക്കുന്നത് നിങ്ങളുടെ വിലയേറിയ അഭിപ്രായങ്ങളും പ്രോത്സാഹനവും മാത്രം ആണ് ഈ കഥക്ക്‌ നിങ്ങൾ ഒരുപാട് പേര് നല്ല നല്ല കമെന്റ് കൾ തന്നു ഇത് മാത്രം മതി എഴുതാൻ ഉള്ള ഊർജം... നിർ ഭാഗ്യവശാൽ എനിക്ക് ഈ സൈറ്റിൽ കേറാൻ കഴിഞ്ഞില്ലേ അത് കൊണ്ട് നിങ്ങൾ ക്ക്‌ സമയത്തിന് മറുപടി തരാനും കഴിഞ്ഞില്ല അതിൽ അതിയായ സുഖം ഉണ്ട്... വായന കാരുടെ ഓരോ പ്രതികരണത്തിനും എഴുത്തുകാർ മറുപടി കൊടുക്കണം എന്ന അഭിപ്രായകാരൻ ആണ് ഞാൻ എങ്കിൽ മാത്രമേ അവർക്ക് വീണ്ടും കമെന്റ് ഇടാൻ താല്പര്യം ഉണ്ടാവു... മാത്രം അല്ല... വായനക്കാറുമായി സംവാദിക്കുമ്പോൾ പുതിയ പുതിയ കാഴ്ച കളിലേക്കു മിഴി തുറക്കും.. നിങ്ങൾ ക്ക്‌ മറുപടി തരാൻ കഴിയാത്തത്തിൽ ക്ഷമ ചോദിക്കുന്നു പതിയെ എല്ലാവർക്കും മറുപടി തരാം ഇതിൽ കമെന്റ് രേഖപ്പെടുത്തിയത് എല്ലാം പെൺകുട്ടികൾ ആണ് അത് കൊണ്ട് പെൺ മനസ് കൂടുതൽ വാഴിക്കാൻ പറ്റി.... ബാക്കി ഭാഗം എഴുതി കൊണ്ടിരിക്കുന്നു.... ഈ ആഴ്ച തന്നെ അപ്‌ലോഡ് ആക്കാൻ കഴിയും എന്ന് ആണ് വിശോസം.. നിങ്ങളുടെ ഈ സ്നേഹവും പിന്തുണയും എന്നും ഉണ്ടാവണം എന്ന് അഭ്യർത്ഥിക്കുന്നു.... എന്ന് നിങ്ങളുടെ സ്വന്തം ബിഗ്ഗ് ബോസ്സ് 🙏🏾

In coming parts I am expecting the following (if you can plz consider.....this is my humble suggestions and humble request) **Roshni is telling and sharing more sexual enjoyment with her husband etc to Haseena. **Roshni is making Haseena too hot in Haseena's mind to do sex as soon as possible. **Roshni is helping Haseena to enjoy sex . For this Roshni is starting Lesbian with Haseena for a number of times. **Roshni is stimulating Haseena to bring her sister also in the world of sex. **Roshni - Jayan couple planning to make Haseena thinking about sex. Many strategies adopted/implemented by them to bring Haseena into the world of sex. Many failure strategies from them is finally ended in success to bring Haseena to enjoy sex with Jayan. **Roshni bring Haseena in infront of Roshni's husband Jayan **Roshni helps Haseena to start sex with her husband Jayan. Roshni undress Haseena in infront of Roshni's husband Jayan. **Roshni take the penis of Jayan and insert husband's penis into the vagina of Haseena without any safe measures, precautions, pills, condom etc. **Haseena thinking about safe period, safety measures, pills, pregnancy etc. **Haseena is worried about pregnancy, painful insertion etc. ** Painful insertion leads to defloration bleeding and ended in creampie insemination impregnation. **More number of times insemination impregnation creampie **Same thing happened to Haseena's sister also. **Three ladies are getting 🥚🥚🥚🥚 from Jayan & convert into pregnancy, carries babies simultaneously by all three ladies. **Three ladies enjoying sex even during the time of gestation period. **Lesbian, threesome, foursome etc.

Where r u man When will send your next part What happened No any updates, reply to comments... That's why I am asking... Sorry if I hurt you

Hellooooo...., Plz .... We are waiting for next part.... We want immense pleasure and enjoyment in next part...

This story can include too many virginity losing also

Hello author...... I am waiting for the remaining part.... Plz upload ASAP..... Really fantastic story

We are eagerly waiting for your stories especially remaining part of this story. It's awesome. Hope you can send this week....

Superb writing and superb stories. Reading of some comments and suggestions from readers are interesting and can add more imagination fantasy .. Keep writing Enjoy each moments

If can plz add more conversations between Roshni and Haseena about sexual enjoyment of Roshni-Jayan etc ; more stimulative talking from Roshni about all kind of sex and sexual experiences of Roshni -Jayan couple sex regarding different positions in sex etc; Strategies-conversations adopted by Jayan and Roshni to bring & adapt Haseena into real sex. conversations among Jayan-Roshni, Roshni-Haseena, Jayan-Haseena, Jayan-Roshni-Haseena about strategies to be adopted to adding Haseena's sister and other ladies in to the world of sexual enjoyment; & about adding Haseena’s sister etc. If can plz add in detail about Success and failures of Roshni-Jayan team to bring Haseena before Jayan; More worries and procedure about upcoming moments in Haseena’s mind; Conversations regarding precautions, avoidance of safety measures , pills, strategies adopted to impregnating Haseena-Haseena's Sister, how to inculcate them about the need of babies etc; Painful insertion with painful bleeding with loud painful crying etc; Insemination impregnation creampie; Pregnancy time sexual enjoyment etc; Impregnation with the support of each other ladies; welcoming moments of babies by three ladies from Jayan etc These are my suggestions only. Author has the right to accept or reject the suggestions from readers. These are my imaginations also. If can plz add in your writing patterns. If these suggestions are included, it will more enjoyable for me and some other readers.

Jayan should become a lucky man this story. Reasons vl b as follows He should get virginity of Haseena He should get virginity of Haseena's sister too He should pump his 🥚🥚🥚🥚 into the vagina of both sisters His wife Roshni should support him to fuck both sisters His wife should support him to impregnating both sisters His wife Roshni will undress both ladies for first time in front of Jayan and Roshni should insert Jayan's penis into the vagina of both sisters etc